snarkalicious
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Post by snarkalicious on May 10, 2010 23:24:18 GMT -5
Hi everyone, I have started a website to sell some of my handmade items-please take a look and tell me what you think! I am fairly new to this so any constructive criticism is welcomed... josephinescloset.weebly.com/Shannon
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Post by Warkitty on May 11, 2010 7:43:02 GMT -5
Might want to specify what the hats and shawls are made of. As of right now, it would be easy to think they're made of grocery bags.
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Post by Bob on May 12, 2010 6:41:34 GMT -5
* The green text is hard to read. (Make it darker) * The picture at the top is dominant and says nothing. Remove it or replace it with a LOGO. * The image at the beginning of "I've been using homemade laundry detergent " doesn't exist.(Broken link)
src = "/weebly/images/na.jpg?1786740?5184010 "
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snarkalicious
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Post by snarkalicious on May 18, 2010 12:11:01 GMT -5
Thanks for words of advise, I am making changes!
Kitty, the descriptions of individual hats/shawls mentions the type of yarn used-you think I should move it to the header? And a plastic bag hat is an interesting idea.....
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Post by Warkitty on May 18, 2010 13:34:30 GMT -5
I must have missed it Snark.
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